I'm working with Jesse on a TV pilot that he's writing and directing
"The writer takes care in the thesis statement to articulate a paper's argument as precisely as possible, and this precision clarifies and focuses the direction of the paper." Moore and Cassel, Authors of Techniques for College Writing To quickly identify vague language, look for "umbrella" nouns like "things", "life", or "everything", and opinion-based words like "good", "bad", or "interesting" that lack clear criteria
1973 Philip Morris opens a cigarette factory on Commerce Road
Change your habits, change your mind, smoking flowers is divine
He was much like the infuriating kid in school who excels at everything: a cheerful, broad-shouldered, multilingual scholar, poet, mathematician, sportsman, brawler